Thursday, April 23, 2020

Soldier



Dear Bob Boby




I hope you have good food. Also don't die please because that would be bad. Anyway I hope you win and have a good night's sleep. The government is rationing all the food. I hope the trenches are slippery. Today we went to town and got some bread. It took so long.


Your sincerely
Jim Boby.

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2 comments:

  1. Mandy DoddsApril 24, 2020 at 11:05 AM

    Well done, James.
    Do you know how to change the formatting so it is all on the page? It would make it easier to read. If you're not sure, ask someone on the hangout this afternoon.

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  2. Mrs MinehanApril 29, 2020 at 12:50 PM

    Kia ora James. I can just imagine how Jim Boby must have felt from your writing. I wonder what descriptive words you could use to describe the bread? Imagine how it tasted after waiting so long to get it, and what it must have smelt like. Mmm, my tummy is rumbling thinking about fresh bread.

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