Thursday, September 28, 2017


The drive was annoying because it took too long. I wish it doesn't take too long.

The top bunk was fun because I got to sleep in the top. The  top bunk was comfy because it was not hard.

I had fun and I was tired because I had to do all the activities. The next morning I was tired because I had a big nite.

Friday, June 30, 2017

Big vs Bigger.

We watched this video clip from TKI which was our sentence starter, and then I wrote the ending. They fly on into the sky and gut shot with a gun a big gun. Their names wher Jim and Jimey. They end up in nath pool and shure Santa Claus and Santa Claus gave them presents.

Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:


I want to have movies at lunchtime when it's rainy so we do not have to play in the hallway because the hallway is boring, so i want to watch a movie.