Friday, November 30, 2018

camp

On Monday we went to Westport for school camp and we had lots of fun there. We had to do a three km walk. We drank lots of water. We loved the place where we stayed because it was big and we could run around. We did the pancake rocks for our first activity then for our second activity we went kayaking. We left on Wednesday.
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 4, 2019 at 10:01 AM

    I liked your writing because it held a lot of information about what you did at camp.My feedback would be to give the title more of a hook so that It will attract more readers, other than that it was great.

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  2. UnknownJune 10, 2019 at 9:25 AM

    Thanks ill try.

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