Wednesday, June 27, 2018

imaginary planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report


Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.


Strange things
Keywords
Rains nucks
Topic sentence
On Venus 2.0 it Rains nucks any time.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)


When it rains the aliens move to their underground houses

They protect the aliens so they do not get hurt.

When the nucks come down they catch on fire and mack craters.

Concluding sentence

Living Creatures
Keywords
Bright green big and tall 4 heads 26 leggs 50 iyes  19 arms
Topic sentence
Aliehs world run around in venus 2.0 and it will de wired  


Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
  • On venus 2.0 you can drive in flying cars and you can also go to underground houses. And there are mushroom cows walking around and they eat chocolate plants. There are alis to they go around and they 4 heads 26 leggs 50 eyes and 19 arms.    
 
    




Concluding sentence

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