We watched this video clip from TKI which was our sentence starter, and then I wrote the ending.
They fly on into the sky and gut shot with a gun a big gun. Their names wher Jim and Jimey. They end up in nath pool and shure Santa Claus and Santa Claus gave them presents.
Kia ora my name is Josh i'm from auckland point england school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you watched a clip and told a story by it. By the way it's north pole not nath pool. anyways enjoy the rest of your day