Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:

Movies

I want to have movies at lunchtime when it's rainy so we do not have to play in the hallway because the hallway is boring, so i want to watch a movie.