Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Kumara School in Kumara, on the West Coast of New Zealand.
Monday, September 25, 2017
Friday, August 25, 2017
Friday, June 30, 2017
Big vs Bigger.
We watched this video clip from TKI which was our sentence starter, and then I wrote the ending.
They fly on into the sky and gut shot with a gun a big gun. Their names wher Jim and Jimey. They end up in nath pool and shure Santa Claus and Santa Claus gave them presents.
Tuesday, June 27, 2017
Tuesday, June 20, 2017
Wednesday, May 17, 2017
Persuasive Writing
We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing. We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.
Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:
Movies
I want to have movies at lunchtime when it's rainy so we do not have to play in the hallway because the hallway is boring, so i want to watch a movie.
Monday, March 27, 2017
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